The Golden Kitten

This is a story that Colesy wrote the other day.  I fixed most of the spelling so it would be easier to read.  :)

The Golden Kitten

by Colesy Brownlee

age 7

favorite thing to do is eat

Once there was a cat and she was pregnant and the next day she had her kittens.  she had 3 boys and 2 girls.  she named the boys patch, cocoa and smoky. and she named him patch because he had one special patch on him and she named cocoa cocoa because he was the color of cocoa.  she named smoky smoky because he was the color of smoke.  and she named her girl kittens angel and punkin she named angel angel because angel was all white and she named punkin punkin because punkin was a golden kitten!!! and when the kittens were big enough to play outside by themselves punkin wanted an adventure so punkin went to the river with patch and angel.  then punkin saw a box.  it was beside the river so punkin jumped in the box and it floated away. punkin was so scared.  punkin cried and cried then punkin realized that the water was getting faster and faster then right when punkin was about to fall down the waterfall she jumped on a rock.  punkin was okay but she was stuck on the rock.  then she saw a turtle.  punkin jumped on the turtle and the turtle swam to shore.  punkin thanked the turtle and ran away from the water where it was safe.  But it was not safe where punkin went. punkin went to death valley!!!!!!!  where no animal could live but birds and frogs.  then punkin got out of there.  she went to a valley where people lived and punkin became famous.

The End

Spelling by Colesy:

pregnate - pregnant

speicil - special

she spelled all the punkins pukin!  cracked me up!!!

scard - scared

cryed - cried

realived - realized

ware - where

phamus - famous

I also liked how she added her favorite thing to do at the beginning with her name! :)